- Funfare idea is strong and quirky, definitely something that people will remember
- The idea of bumper cars could be associated with dangerous driving
- Pair with a slogan that cancels this out
- Funfare - without the bumps?
- Theme of the funfair could be pushed a lot further
- Look at more products associated with the fair
- Use of language
- Design aspects like typography and colour
Saturday, 7 December 2013
Elmwood - Interim Crit.
Recently, Steph from Elmwood visited the studio to do an interim crit for this brief to discuss peoples initial ideas and progress. Here was my feedback: